Latest topics
» Ember Warden (awaiting verification opinions welcome)
Fri Nov 24, 2017 1:29 pm by Ember jailer

» Iron Tyrant (Completed)
Mon Nov 13, 2017 4:24 am by Basil~

» Celeste Diamond(waiting for feedback)
Thu Nov 02, 2017 1:09 pm by josh64male

» Inkwell Leviathan vs Promethium Regalia
Mon Feb 13, 2017 6:47 pm by Miale-Sempai

» Yuuto Shimizu
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:05 am by Nakara

» NPC fight no4
Wed Jan 11, 2017 6:22 pm by Miale-Sempai

» TAG BATTLE
Wed Jan 11, 2017 6:21 pm by Miale-Sempai

» PVP Prometeum regalia vs Vermillion grip
Wed Jan 11, 2017 6:17 pm by Miale-Sempai

» NPC fight no3
Wed Jan 11, 2017 6:15 pm by Miale-Sempai

Navigation
 Portal
 Index
 Memberlist
 Profile
 FAQ
 Search

Alice Lynn "Fern Acrobat"

View previous topic View next topic Go down

Alice Lynn "Fern Acrobat"

Post by AliceAlabasa on Wed Oct 16, 2013 4:36 am

Real World:
Name: Alice Lynn

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Appearance:
Much like the picture..though she sometimes wears other outfits like a white t-shirt,teal jacket and blue jeans.

History: Ever since she was born, Alice has had many problems with her body that prevents her from partaking in any activity that requires a lot of physical labor or stress. She can't even run for too long before tasting blood in the back of her throat and becoming light headed, shes not even allowed into the gym class because of this. Alice was born in America, but when she was around the age of two she and her family moved to Japan. Thanks to her condition, her parents had a nuro-linker installed onto her when she was born; so that they could monitor her vitals and make sure she isn't pushing her body too hard. Since physical activity was out of the question, she had begun to do things like reading, drawing and playing games to entertain her self and to pass the time. She loved being in a virtual world where her bodies fragility didn't exist, but her favorite game however wasn't a virtual reality game. Her favorite game was a console one, where she played as a strong and acrobatic heroine.

The character was really fast and would do all kinds of jumps and even run and leap off of the walls, Alice wished she could do stuff like that, but her body was so fragile. She always felt inferior to everyone else, she was jealous of them, all the things they could do with their bodies that could handle physical labor. After beating the game she had an interest in people who were strong and fast in real life. She would watch things like fighting matches and martial arts shows or movies, and after that she'd watch some videos of people do things know as "Parkour" and "Free-running" much like the hero in her game. How she wanted to be like her, how she wanted to be nimble and make her way through things and pull off stuff like running along the walls.

Alice is someone who is very unsure of her self and what she should do, shes constantly questioning what she should do. Should she try and take on her problems on her own? Risk harm to try and make her body a little stronger? Or should see just lay back, hoping it will change one day or just put it to the back of her mind. Though after sometime, she began to believe that there really was nothing she could do and just resulted to hoping. Hoping that maybe some day technology will advance enough to where it can make her body stronger so she can have a normal laugh like everyone else. Being someone who wants to get close to people, but doesn't really know how. So she had only a few friends, one of them being Kaito. Kaito was the kind of guy who wasn't all judgemental about people, quite mature for his age. One day he had asked her to come over to his house, Alice figured he was just going to cheer her up. Since people have been calling her weird over her fondness for creepy things and horror, she smiled whenever something of that type came up and it kind of freaked some of her class mates out. But instead when she got there Kaito asked her to direct link with him. She shrugged because unlike most girls her age, she didn't think that it meant anything.

It was then that Kaito had told her to install the file he was sending, a file called "Brain Burst" She nodded as she began to install it. When it was completed it said "Welcome to the accelerated world!" she blinked at this and asked Kaito just what was this? He then began to explain Brain Burst to her, and told her that she should come back tomorrow and he'll explain more then, and that tonight she would have a strange nightmare. Kaito told her not to connect to the global network until she was with him. Alice did as he said and when she got there, he explained everything else about it. Alice nodded and then she began to explain to him what happened in her nightmare.

In her nightmare, she found her self in a foggy wide open hallway, streaching out beyond her field of vision. She saw that a few feet away from her there was a large, bottomless hole from one end of the hallway to the other. As she rubbed her eyes and took everything in she then saw a silhouette of a young woman. As Alice walked towards her the woman sprinted and began running along the wall, soon she launched her self off of the wall and elegantly soared to the other wall, doing such lovely flips before she landed on the wall and began running again. Repeating this until she was almost out of sight. Alice began to run after her and fail into the abyss below crying, as she reached her hands out towards the woman she shouted with all the might her tiny voice could muster "I just want to be like you! I want to move like you do!" and as her vision began to fade to black, she heard a strange voice ask her "Is that your wish?"

Personality:  She wants to build relationships with people, but has trouble with it because of her not understanding what she should do. Shes usually kind, but if you push her to far..She will snap. Though shes a little more open to people she trust.

Points of Distinction: Shes a decent artist and she loves horror stories, creepy pictures, videos,games and erie music. Shes a gamer...All gaming, expect her to go on a nerd talking spree if you mention games she loves. Did I mention she is also a pretty decent singer?

Brain Burst Avatar: Fern Acrobat

Appearance: Is a fern colored femimine looking avatar.  Very thin, light weight and nimble and smooth, this avatar is clearly built for speed and acrobatics. The robotic looking avatar is so smooth its form almost looks organic, it is about the size of a 14 year old girl but a little more slender.

Explanation: The Fern Acrobat is the manifestation of Alice's inferiority complex and her desire to be fast, agile and strong. shes a close quarters combatant with high speed but low defense.

Parent: Kaito Kagamine / Cyan Demon

Stats: Current distribution of your stats. Refer to here for explanations: http://www.accelworldrp.com/t1405-stat-and-fighting-system

     -STR B (60) (DIR = 30  AMR = 30)
     -TAC C (30) (SPL = 30  INT = 0)
     -ATK B (60)
     -DEF C (30)
     -AGI A (100)
     -KG D (10)
     -B&W 70



Abilities and Armaments: You have (1 Killer move) and (1 Ability [Passive or Active] or 1 Starting Armament).

-Name: Acceleration Parkour

-Cost:Limited Activation (5% per post)

-Description: Her Dual Avatar is able to preform hardcore parkour and acorbatics, doing flips rolls and even climbing and running up or along walls.

-Effect: Able to do things such as Wall Running, Wall Jumping, and Rolls, and vaults as well as jump over her enemy. She also has a enhanced jumping ability to a certain extent, and  enhanced speed when using it.

-Weakness: Can easily be put off balance if distracted or hit unless she blocks/dodge.

-Name: Dragon Kick

-Cost: 50% Killer Gauge

-Description: A simple Dragon kick

-Effect: Does 50% physical and 50% special damage, as well as having a strong knock-back affect.

-Weakness: Attack takes a a few seconds, can be dodged and can be intercepted.


Last edited by AliceAlabasa on Sun Oct 27, 2013 6:35 pm; edited 24 times in total
avatar
AliceAlabasa
Starter

Posts : 28
Join date : 2013-10-15

Character Stats
Name: Fern Acrobat
Level:
Burst Points:
300/300  (300/300)

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Alice Lynn "Fern Acrobat"

Post by Nakara on Wed Oct 16, 2013 9:35 pm

Okay so there are a few problems with your app that need to be resolved before approval. First and for most is the color. Going by your history you should be green  since you react to your trauma by wishing you could move freely and wishes/prayers in response to the trauma is what creates green DAs. Purple DAs by contrast are created by a fight/flight response to the trauma look at Bunting Martel's character creation FAQ for more details on this.

The second problem arises from this section of your history:
"She had grown jealous of anyone who could do such things, how lucky they are. Alice was even jealous of her friend who did gymnastics, how she had moved with such grace and how fast she could run. She had cursed her frail body, she was silently enraged at what a bad card life at given her. Hating her weak body with a passion, always wanting a better one."
Grudges like this create indirect curse type abilities(think of Dusk Takers Demonic Commandeer).

Final point for now is that your KM is really weak and should be buffed as 75% gauge consumption is a lot.

As a closing note I did this on my phone so please excuse any typos and be aware I may have missed some things on the app.
avatar
Nakara
Veteran

Posts : 188
Join date : 2012-12-11
Age : 22

Character Stats
Name: Inkwell Leviathan
Level: 1
Burst Points:
120/300  (120/300)

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Alice Lynn "Fern Acrobat"

Post by R4yleonard on Thu Oct 17, 2013 8:26 am

All grammatical error aside, the name Alabasa is uncommon to American. Either change it, or explain why she was named like that


Spoiler:

Jonquil Shadow

Stats :
Spoiler:

- STR : 20 (D)
  > DIR : 10 (D)
  > AMR : 10 (D)
- TAC : 100 (A)
  > SPL : 60 (B)
  > INT : 40 (C)
- AGI : 50 (B)
- KG : 30 (C)

- ATK : 70 (B+)
- DEF : 50 (B)


Killer Move : Anonymous
Cost : 30%
avatar
R4yleonard
Senior

Posts : 468
Join date : 2012-08-21
Age : 21
Location : Jakarta, Indonesia

Character Stats
Name: Jonquil Shadow
Level: 1
Burst Points:
125/300  (125/300)

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Alice Lynn "Fern Acrobat"

Post by Vixxy on Thu Oct 17, 2013 4:05 pm

Approved.
avatar
Vixxy
Administrator

Posts : 181
Join date : 2013-03-13
Location : Hidden Valley

Character Stats
Name: Sapphire Minstrel
Level: 1
Burst Points:
100/300  (100/300)

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Alice Lynn "Fern Acrobat"

Post by Nakara on Thu Oct 17, 2013 10:40 pm

Approved.
avatar
Nakara
Veteran

Posts : 188
Join date : 2012-12-11
Age : 22

Character Stats
Name: Inkwell Leviathan
Level: 1
Burst Points:
120/300  (120/300)

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Alice Lynn "Fern Acrobat"

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top


 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum