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Mitsuzane Kureshima-Lemon Buffer [WIP]

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Mitsuzane Kureshima-Lemon Buffer [WIP]

Post by Rotor on Sun Oct 06, 2013 11:01 am

Real World
Name: Mitsuzane Kureshima (or Mitsu for short)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Appearance:
Personality: Several lines describing your characters thoughts and actions. This is important towards making your Brain Burst Avatar.
History:
Mitsu comes from a very old and very wealthy family. Of course, he had a neural linker installed when he was born, because his parents could afford to do that. He grew up in quite a sheltered environment, namely his parents’ house. His parents weren’t around that much, due to “important business”, so he spent a lot of his early childhood raised by their housekeeper, Fuko. Whenever he asked about his parents, Fuko responded by telling him that they were doing good out in the world, leading Mitsu to develop something of an idolised view of his parents, believing them to be the best people in the world.

Of course, opinions can be changed. Mitsu’s opinion changed when he was 15, on a rare occasion that his parents were home. His father kept a study in the house, and had accidentally left the door open. Mitsu’s curiosity overtook him, and he snuck inside just to see what was going on. Spotting some papers on the desk, he took a quick peek, and his world was turned upside down. It was that day he discovered his idolised view of his parents was entirely incorrect. His parents seemed to have a hand in smuggling, arms dealing and almost every other kind of criminal activity. To have his view of his parents shattered in such a brutal way practically broke his spirit. When he was asked if anything was wrong, this was his response: “No, nothing. I’m…I’m alright.”

Though people could tell there was something clearly wrong, Mitsu just denied it. Most let him be. One person, however, saw right through him. He was a complete stranger who Mitsu bumped into on the street, and yet it seemed like he could read Mitsu like a book, because he then said to the young man “You look like someone who’s been through hell.”

“I, um…I don’t know what you mean.” Mitsu replied, keeping his composure.

“Yeah, you do.” The stranger had said. “But that’s okay. Say, I’ve got something that might help you. You have a cable?”

“Sure.” And Mitsu had joined himself to the stranger via direct connection. Within minutes, he found himself on the receiving end of a program called “Brain Burst”. Though he had no idea what it could be, he thanked the stranger and moved on. All the stranger had to say was “We’ll meet again.”

That night, Mitsu did not sleep well. In his dream, he saw his parents in the way he had seen them before: Absolutely perfect human beings. Then they started to dissolve. Their flesh disappeared, and was replaced with something absolutely terrifying. All Mitsu could say in response was “no”. He kept saying it over and over and over and over again while he ran from the things his parents had become. It was at that point he woke up.
Point of Distinction: Mitsu always tries to keep a smile on his face, no matter the situation. This has been known to fail at times.

Brain Burst Avatar
Appearance:
Lemon Buffer:
Explanation: Yellow colour, out of his denial of any trauma, burying his scars under jokes
Parent: Byzantium Launcher

    Avatar Statistics: [url=google.com]Please insert the stats explanation link here.[/url]
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Abilities and Armaments: You have (1 Killer move) and (1 Ability [Passive or Active] or 1 Starting Armament).
Name: Name of the Killer Move/Ability/Starting Armament
Cost: Is there a cost of activation or use?
Description: How does the Killer Move/Ability/Starting Armament look like?
Effect: How does it apply on your character, other avatars, or the environment?
Weakness: What are ways that this Killer Move/Ability/Starting Armament is flawed in? If it is a very powerful Killer Move/Ability it must have a weakness.


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Re: Mitsuzane Kureshima-Lemon Buffer [WIP]

Post by R4yleonard on Sun Oct 06, 2013 12:16 pm



Spoiler:

Jonquil Shadow

Stats :
Spoiler:

- STR : 20 (D)
  > DIR : 10 (D)
  > AMR : 10 (D)
- TAC : 100 (A)
  > SPL : 60 (B)
  > INT : 40 (C)
- AGI : 50 (B)
- KG : 30 (C)

- ATK : 70 (B+)
- DEF : 50 (B)


Killer Move : Anonymous
Cost : 30%
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Join date : 2012-08-21
Age : 21
Location : Jakarta, Indonesia

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Name: Jonquil Shadow
Level: 1
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Re: Mitsuzane Kureshima-Lemon Buffer [WIP]

Post by Rotor on Sun Oct 06, 2013 6:59 pm

D: I have been found out!

Yes, I did draw inspiration from Warframe's Vauban. Mostly because I couldn't think of a better suffix.
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Re: Mitsuzane Kureshima-Lemon Buffer [WIP]

Post by R4yleonard on Mon Oct 07, 2013 6:50 am

Too bad for you, Vauban is not a real word


Spoiler:

Jonquil Shadow

Stats :
Spoiler:

- STR : 20 (D)
  > DIR : 10 (D)
  > AMR : 10 (D)
- TAC : 100 (A)
  > SPL : 60 (B)
  > INT : 40 (C)
- AGI : 50 (B)
- KG : 30 (C)

- ATK : 70 (B+)
- DEF : 50 (B)


Killer Move : Anonymous
Cost : 30%
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Age : 21
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Level: 1
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Re: Mitsuzane Kureshima-Lemon Buffer [WIP]

Post by Rotor on Tue Oct 08, 2013 11:07 am

Wha? But...I....*cries*

Welp, time to think up a new suffix.
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Re: Mitsuzane Kureshima-Lemon Buffer [WIP]

Post by Destination on Tue Oct 08, 2013 11:25 am

Just a little tip; if you have difficulty filling in his Personality and History, try doing his History first, then his Personality. You can then connect his Personality to specific points from his History.


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To do: Rulebook, possible FAQ.
Lore: Fill up the story and integrate with current system of avatars.
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Re: Mitsuzane Kureshima-Lemon Buffer [WIP]

Post by Rotor on Tue Oct 08, 2013 5:24 pm

I will certainly take that into account!
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