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Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Thu Oct 03, 2013 2:16 am

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Name: Masaru Kagami

Age: 17

Gender: Male

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Personality: The one word that best describes Masaru's personality is "apathetic." Masaru tends to be disinterested in everything around him and simply has the goal of "winning" as long as this goal is achieved, he tends to not care about how it is done or what sacrifices must be made to do it. For this reason Masaru is often correctly perceived as being cold or distant from other people. He believes firmly in the idea that the ends justify the means in all situations as long as he himself is not sacrificed as part of those means. He is rather arrogant for the reason that he is smarter than average and well aware of that fact as well.

History: Masaru was born of mixed heritage, with his father being Japanese while his mother is an American. His parents gave him a neuro linker from birth in order to ensure that he excels at academics in the future. This push from his parents towards excellence and the expectation that he would excel in all things he does has played a large part in making him into the apathetic person he is today.

When Masaru first entered school he was bullied for clearly not being pure blooded Japanese a. In elementary school it was simply him being teased and some people avoiding him but when Masaru entered middle school the severity of the bullying rapidly escalated. He would be frequently beaten outside the view of the social cameras and was forced to buy the bullies things on several occasions. Despite this Masaru continued to work towards excelling at school and acted like nothing was happening in front of his few friends. He made no outward signs of being bullied and when questioned about it feigned complete ignorance of the problem. On the inside though Masaru sought to show them something that truly deserves to be mocked for its appearance, something so hideous that simply looking at it would bring them the pain he feels. Even though he refused to show it or even acknowledge there was a problem thoughts like these often came into Masaru's mind and he frequently found himself to be quite angry with the people who assaulted him.

While these feelings festered inside of him one of Masaru's friends approached him and asked him if he wanted a way to surpass his own limits. When Masaru told him he did that friend gave him Brain Burst which was installed successfully. That night Masaru had a nightmare where he was being attacked by all the bullies he had ever encountered, they beat him and mocked him for his appearance. At this time Masaru thought to himself "I want to show them something truly grotesque to make them feel the same pain as I did" he then heard a voice ring out "Is that your wish?" and woke up.

The next day Masaru met with his friend who explained to him about how acceleration works as well as how to play brain burst. For one of the few times in his life Masaru was intrigued and decided to set out to become a level ten and clear the game hoping that he could learn for what purpose the game was made.

Points of Distinction: Works hard to excel at everything, and refuses to acknowledge any area he falls short in.

Brain Burst Avatar:
AW Name: Madras(Mostly black with a little yellow) Horror

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Without the mace


Explanation: Yellow from denying that he is being bullied, black from obsessively wanting those bulling him to be in pain even in spite of not admitting to himself he is being bullied.

Parent: Iridium Berserker

Stats: Current distribution of your stats.
 -STR: 80(B+)
     -DIR: 50(B)
     -AMR: 30(C)
 -TAC: 70
     -SPL: 70(B+)
     -INT: 0(F)
 -AGI: 50(B)
 -KG: 0(F)
 -ATK: 120(A)
 -DEF: 30(C)
 -B&W: 0

Abilities and Armaments: You have (1 Killer move) and (1 Ability [Passive or Active] or 1 Starting Armament).
Name of Killer Move  Snare

Effect: A tentacle grows out of the ground and snares the opponent preventing movement. The tentacle disappears after one round.

Cost:  30%

Description:  Roots the target for 1 posting round and deal blunt damage equal to Madras Horrors ATK.

Weaknesses: The opponent can still counterattack. Can be destroyed.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Name of Ability: Horrific Presence

Type: Limited Activation Passive Skill

Cost: 3% gauge per posting round

Effect: Every turn that Madras horror is being looked at an illusion(described below) grows over the DA causing feeling of intense nausea and discomfort by looking at it after being looked at for longer times(exact steps listed below) the world around Madras Horror becomes distorted as well making it hard to judge distances or aim properly . Every turn that he is not being looked at by another duel avatar the illusion regresses one step until they look at Madras Horror again or their the illusion vanishes not having the ability active will also cause dexterity to recover.

Description: Every turn that Madras Horror is being looked at an illusion becomes becomes increasingly overlaid over his avatar beginning by black maggots appearing to slowly come out of him and engulf him and swelling until he eventually appears to be a swollen mass of tentacles. This illusion is specific to each other avatar rather than being a globally seen illusion, and simulates touch as well as appearance. Steps the illusion follows bellow:
1 post- Madras Horror is covered in black maggot like creatures only causes a sense of nausea when being looked at.
2 posts- The maggots that cover Madras Horror link together forming long tentacles that envelop his body the sense of nausea increases.
3 posts- Nausea starts to become powerful and it starts to become hard to tell where the illusion ends and where Madras Horrors body begins.
4 posts- The area around Madras Horror starts to appear distorted making it hard to tell how far from Madras Horror, disorientation and dizziness also begins appearing at this point.
5 posts- Disorientation becomes stronger and the area around Madras Horror becomes further distorted making it extremely difficult to judge distances.
6+ posts- The area around Madras Horror is extremely distorted and aiming attacks straight and hitting becomes nearly impossible as a result of the illusions.

Weaknesses: Does no damage, only affects those who are looking at Madras Horror also the illusion does not appear in any reflections of Madras Horror though it will occur when looking through a scope or other viewing device. When active the ability affects allies as well as enemies. Area of effect attacks that can be used without seeing Madras Horror are not impeded by this ability.


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by R4yleonard on Thu Oct 03, 2013 11:59 am

Aside from those vocabulary error (dextarity -> dexterity, weather -> whether, effect -> affect, dening -> denying, etc), I think Flare doesn't fit the Horror/"scary and grotesque illusion" theme at all. Also, Nakara is an uncommon name (the data I found says it's a girl's name : http://www.ourbabynamer.com/Nakara-name-popularity.html) , it can't explain his US origin at all and you have to explain why does he have such name


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Thu Oct 03, 2013 3:42 pm

Okay as for all the grammer/spelling stuff my plan has been to fix that as soon as I can use my computer instead of my phone(probably should have put that in my post but whatever). As far as flare goes headbutt doesn't really fit Crow's flight theme either so that's the logic I went on making it. As for the name no real reason I can't change it so I'll do that too when I next get my computer connected to the internet.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Platinum Blader on Fri Oct 04, 2013 10:34 am

The thing with Crow's headbutt is to serve as a fake KM that trumps the enemy, showing that his potential lies elsewhere. Headbutt has nothing special, if increased damage. While flare would be linked to a DA with sun/light/whatever abilities, thus why it seems weird to us.


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Dranes on Fri Oct 04, 2013 5:38 pm

...No? Headbutt is unimpressive but that is his KM? Just like Spiral Gravity Driver was Pile's lvl 1 KM. Lvl 1 KMs are always unimpressive and (I guess) have some sort very vague link to the avatar but they're not totally out the ball park random like Flare is (horror-looking fellow, all of a sudden BLINDING FLASH). Iirc on this point at least.

'Potential' is put in the unique 'thing' (EA, ability, etc) of the avatar, where the potential is concentrated not in KMs or what not.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Mon Oct 07, 2013 2:03 am

Okay I think I fixed all the problems listed.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by R4yleonard on Thu Oct 10, 2013 11:49 am

Well, the KM does seems a bit useless, but it does have some function (some parts might have spikes after the transition). If you don't mind having such useless KM, I'll give you my approval. You can change it if you want


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Platinum Blader on Thu Oct 10, 2013 12:31 pm

Hum, forced stage transition is kinda OP in a sense. I wouldn't approve of that.

Also, presence is a passive ability, but it costs KG? You do know that someone can lock your KG for good by looking at you every time and saying "Fuck my accuracy"?


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Thu Oct 10, 2013 3:21 pm

I'd ask how it's OP because I honestly don't see it, and yes I'm aware that my KG can be locked down but its a fairly strong debuff too which balances it out in my opinion.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Platinum Blader on Thu Oct 10, 2013 3:32 pm

Changing a field that is a disadvantage to you to become one that gives you an edge/makes the opponent unable to exert full potential is kinda OP to me. I know we've seen the same skill in the anime, but I believe the DA that used it was of higher level too.


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Destination on Thu Oct 10, 2013 7:31 pm

If I remember this right, the Unlimited Field is the only place that would be applicable for forced stage transitions. So the earliest you could get such a skill is 4.


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Sun Oct 13, 2013 5:25 am

Well another KM up, also made my ability so that I have to choose to be using it.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by R4yleonard on Sun Oct 13, 2013 9:27 am

Same shit different day huh.
Your KM shares the same problem with those restraining ability, can you destroy what is restraining you (in this case, it's the tentacle)


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Sun Oct 13, 2013 9:36 am

Yep.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by R4yleonard on Mon Oct 14, 2013 11:34 pm

In that case, I'll give my approval. If you have some time, list it as a weakness in your char app, so it won't be misleading



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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Neko Miale on Wed Oct 16, 2013 12:49 pm

Your story still holds your old name, just saying.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Wed Oct 16, 2013 6:00 pm

Thought I changed that, strange anyway next time I have computer access I'll do it same for adding the weakness.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Thu Oct 17, 2013 11:03 pm

Well I got bored and ended up fixing it from my phone anyway.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Fri Oct 25, 2013 2:05 pm

Updated to new stat system.
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Re: Madras Horror

Post by Nakara on Wed Oct 30, 2013 4:18 pm

Bump.
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Post by Destination on Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:34 am

Approved.

I take it that Horrific Presence only works when MH has KG remaining? If that's the case, do edit it to include the phrase 'Limited Activation Passive skill.'


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Re: Madras Horror

Post by R4yleonard on Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:22 pm

Approved again after the change of KM and Stats


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  > AMR : 10 (D)
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  > SPL : 60 (B)
  > INT : 40 (C)
- AGI : 50 (B)
- KG : 30 (C)

- ATK : 70 (B+)
- DEF : 50 (B)


Killer Move : Anonymous
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